Good job! This is a great piece for college radio. Nice use of audio clips from victims and experts; good use of video game sfx interspersed throughout the piece to keep the ear attentive! This is more than just a long-form PSA; it describes a problem and suggests solutions, using believable people. Nice work!
A really good piece, I learned a lot, and the summary was complete, and an excellent wrap up to the piece. The gamer interviews were strong, I was surprised to hear from a 55yr old gamer, shows how little I know about the subject, but that was particularly thought provoking . Like Tim, I liked the use of game sfx and music, in fact I would have preferred more as a pacing element. Good job, learned a lot about the topic.
Good job! This is a great piece for college radio. Nice use of audio clips from victims and experts; good use of video game sfx interspersed throughout the piece to keep the ear attentive! This is more than just a long-form PSA; it describes a problem and suggests solutions, using believable people. Nice work!
A really good piece, I learned a lot, and the summary was complete, and an excellent wrap up to the piece. The gamer interviews were strong, I was surprised to hear from a 55yr old gamer, shows how little I know about the subject, but that was particularly thought provoking . Like Tim, I liked the use of game sfx and music, in fact I would have preferred more as a pacing element. Good job, learned a lot about the topic.
Dean